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*-> Sean's Questions,  
 
*-> Sean's Questions,  
* Both the Glaseah homeworld and their Goddess lack pages. Mars has a page for instance.
 
 
 
*Please clean up and modernize species boilerplate:  
 
*Please clean up and modernize species boilerplate:  
Partial list of flaws found in boiler plate species description as found as appendix to many novels:  
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Partial list of flaws found in boiler plate species description as found as appendix to many, not all, novels (as there are alternate boilerplates):  
 
1)Eldritch described as They are 'one of the only known' of esper/telepath races (a needs-improvement sentence as well as factually incorrect, as the Flizbe and Glaseah are as well.
 
1)Eldritch described as They are 'one of the only known' of esper/telepath races (a needs-improvement sentence as well as factually incorrect, as the Flizbe and Glaseah are as well.
 
2)Glaseah are not described as esper/telepath.  
 
2)Glaseah are not described as esper/telepath.  
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*Should I transcribe your answers from discussion into the wiki?
 
  
 
*Where did Joy's remains end up?  
 
*Where did Joy's remains end up?  
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*Are Joy and Holly directly related/have lineage or not?
 
*Are Joy and Holly directly related/have lineage or not?
  
Should there be a category of typos, sub known sub newly discovered?
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*All Rosettes and Ribbons flaws notes moved to that page's discussion.
Old?
 
*"Dr La'aina infused her slender (missing noun) with so much energy -- claws & starships, : Rosetes and Ribbons
 
*Writing flaw, not typo: Double use of a word in a paragraph: "the *long* coat, the shoulder-length hair, the *long* cheek ruffs:". A beginners flaw, moreso since your vocab is good enough to avoid this. But also a beginners nitpic as that 'rule' is for beginners. : Rosetes and Ribbons
 
There are maybe 2 or 3 lightweight problems in Rosetes that I have not detailed. One is a wrong word, it is a one or two letter word, and I will not find it until I am again reading every word, and that is not likely for years.(Rosetes and Ribbons)
 
  
There was something at the beginning that I did not note. I will find this only years hence.
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*{not sure what culture offers waving tails as a greeting/handshake, not a flaw, just answer that for me, please?}
And there is this, which might not be a flaw, but unintentional humor, however slight, might be.
 
The navy blue(color) sofa against the back wall faced the coffee (color or function) table. Should these correspond? (Rosetes and Ribbons)
 
  
*{not sure what culture offers waving tails as a greeting/handshake, not a flaw, just answer that for me, please?}
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== crutches and aids==:
*main character (Peli) described as having a long coat, drawing shows short haired body (but you have said that the drawings are prelim sketches not canon). But her rosette would not be so strongly plain if on a long hair body.: Rosetes and Ribbons
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* someone should develop a hang glider for those that want to fly, particularly those species that have useless wings. See Glaseah, Malarai,maybe Aera, not likely Phoenix.  
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The wings might even be useful as secondary control surfaces.
  
*'Gentle Guide' needs a cite , See Farmer's Crown, refers to Jahir.
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*There needs to be a sign language for the Gardkin. It should be easier to develop than that for the Naysha. They need it for the same reason: to talk to the non-telepathic. Considering that real world pets can push buttons that say words and thus communicate to present day humans (with massive training), the Hinichi-Guardkin communication problem shows a lack of initiative on the Hinichi. Specifically this never was produced in the Pelted universe, I guess: https://fluent.pet/
  
 
==Requests for Renames/Deletes==
 
==Requests for Renames/Deletes==
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-> Sean's partial list.
 
-> Sean's partial list.
 
I have been leaving notes on places that need updating. I guess I should do that here instead? Should I move them here?
 
  
 
Laelkii_Takara_Lifeweave, Story Appearances, should contain all the works referenced in Reference.  
 
Laelkii_Takara_Lifeweave, Story Appearances, should contain all the works referenced in Reference.  
 
I have noted the missing ones, but could not find how to update/edit the page. It was not straightforward and looked like it referenced a database or table.This is a common problem where that way of handling lists is used, I have seen it in more than one place. The Story Appearances should not be shorter than the different works listed in References.
 
I have noted the missing ones, but could not find how to update/edit the page. It was not straightforward and looked like it referenced a database or table.This is a common problem where that way of handling lists is used, I have seen it in more than one place. The Story Appearances should not be shorter than the different works listed in References.
  
Point of View violation in 2022 year end Holiday story (Silver and Gold), POV according to text is Eldritch, actual speaker is Kindlesflame, A male tam-illee. It is where he is talking about white tie requirements.
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Point of View violation in 2022 year end Holiday story (Silver and Gold), POV according to text is Eldritch, actual speaker is Kindlesflame, A male tam-illee.
Start with "My only other choice for white tie" and its that whole paragraph. It would not ring bad if spoken by an Eldritch, but it is not.
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"My only other choice for white tie is whatever native species claimed after the exodus ... and the Tam-illee wear a ridiculous getup with sash and high waist-ed pants that looks good only on people half my height." It is that whole paragraph.
"My only other choice for white tie is whatever native species claimed after the exodus ... and the Tam-illee wear a ridiculous getup with sash and high waist-ed pants that looks good only on people half my height."
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If I have the speaker correct, KindlesFlame is not so tall as to be twice the height of his species. And should be familiar with the formal wear of his people.
If I have the speaker correct, KindlesFlame is a Tam-illee, (and doctor not HEA) and is not so tall as to be twice the height of his species. And should be familiar with the formal wear of his people.
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Also he is talking about his people as if they were not his people "The Tam-illee" not "my people" not 'we' or 'us', not 'the local Tam-illee' not 'us foxes'. (I need to wait until that story is canon, is published for real)
Also he is talking about his people as if they were not his people "The Tam-illee" not "my people" not 'we' or 'us', not 'the local Tam-illee' not 'us foxes'.
 
  
Are Kellen Grove and Armin Palland alive at the same time? Are they in the same solar system? Planet?  
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Are Kellen Grove and Armin Palland alive at the same time? (to use an example). Are they in the same solar system? Planet? I do not have info to know, and while it would be a huge task to add birth (and death?) dates to every character, it might well be worth it, more-so as you are moving to a calender/date based system.
I do not have info to know, and while it would be a huge task to add birth (and death?) dates to every character, it might well be worth it, more-so as you are moving to a calender/date based system.
 
  
Why did not anyone try to develop a sign language for the Guardkin? It can not be harder than doing so for a water based species. Also now that communication has been established, there is still a need to communicate with non telepathic species, so develop it already.
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Judiesh noted in Mindtouch, near 20% point, has no mention in this wiki, was a roommate to Vashiht'h before Jahir. Find in paragraph beginning "He's a good roommate"
  
 
==Fulfilled Bounties==
 
==Fulfilled Bounties==
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* [[Esper Talents]] and [[Starbases]] info has been copied out of Heartskein for a while now.
 
* [[Esper Talents]] and [[Starbases]] info has been copied out of Heartskein for a while now.
 
* Jaguar answered the question about Jahir letting Sediryl watch (https://studiomcah.locals.com/post/468690/questions-you-have).
 
* Jaguar answered the question about Jahir letting Sediryl watch (https://studiomcah.locals.com/post/468690/questions-you-have).
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[[Category:Meta]]
 
[[Category:Meta]]

Latest revision as of 17:58, 17 January 2022

This page is for research requests. Anyone can request information (not just the author), and anyone can fulfill bounties!


General[edit]

  • Two divinities remain unidentified from the human deck in Pantheon-the-game (from "Pantheon"-the-story).
  • EYE COLOR AND VOICE REGISTER ON CHARACTERS HALP
  • I have mentioned more Fleet ships, I'm sure. Help me find the rest!
  • A lot of the characters have pages but they're missing things like descriptions (what do they look/sound like?) or details (do they have children?). Help!
  • Have all the books been added? I haven't looked
  • Most of the Chatcaava are missing character pages because gack, titles... help on how to handle that would be good (discuss in #archives?)
  • Information about areas in the Chatcaavan Empire are also missing (stuff like how it's divided into quadrants, and the weird names like 'Marchward Flight').
  • Chatcaavan military stuff is completely missing. I know I mentioned stuff like how their alert colors are different from the Alliance's, I gotta put that in one place.
  • Also we learned stuff about Chatcaavan armor and drop commandos (??!) in Air-dancing, that needs to go somewhere.
  • If you're looking for fun things to do, adding your favorite quotes to a character's page (like on Lafayette KindlesFlame's), or reader highlights from books to the book pages would be fun! I am planning to do the latter eventually.(happy!)

First Name Missing[edit]

Last Name Missing[edit]

  • Most of the two Intelligence holds
  • Beronaeth?

Jaguar Requests/Bounties[edit]

Put stuff you need from me here (like maps or deep info or clarifications)

  • This is probably not where these really belong, but two details have been bugging me:
    • If Throneworld females only get one month in the nursery with their babies, and then it's all tongueless attendants, where and when do the children learn any language?
    • Jahir says in Heartskein: "And above the tenantry, most infants are relegated to wet nurses." If everyone has a hard time having babies, chances are good that there's nobody still nursing when a baby finally manages to be born, so where do they find those wetnurses?
  • Clarification please? Per the wiki, Alari Jesa Galare married Teldor Jesa Galare and had six children, three sons, three daughters. All of their daughters were Seni Galare, two sons Jesa Galare and one son Catha Galare. Should Alari be Seni Galare since that's what her daughters were, or did the daughters start the Seni family?
  • Historical Character clarification: In Farmer's Crown, Chapter 14, when they are in Corel's tomb, Liolesa says that Hiranthial's father, Theval, was Jerisa's son. In the Wiki Theval is Jerisa's nephew, his mother was Saranyl. Which is correct?
  • Clarification needed (or map redrawn). In Farmer's Crown Liolesa gives Sediryl a piece of land in Galare "near the border of what was Jisiensire" but they don't share a border according to the map of the northern seaboard, Ulurith is between them. Did you mean Asaniefa?
  • -> Sean's Questions,
  • Please clean up and modernize species boilerplate:

Partial list of flaws found in boiler plate species description as found as appendix to many, not all, novels (as there are alternate boilerplates): 1)Eldritch described as They are 'one of the only known' of esper/telepath races (a needs-improvement sentence as well as factually incorrect, as the Flizbe and Glaseah are as well. 2)Glaseah are not described as esper/telepath. 3)The Hinichi main characteristics are that they are wolf derived and generally strongly religious. Description lacks the second. There's no mention of the Guardkin they share the planet with, and those are another race, even if related. 4) Tam-ille "The last fox based race" really the first such.


  • Where did Joy's remains end up?
  • Are Joy and Holly directly related/have lineage or not?
  • All Rosettes and Ribbons flaws notes moved to that page's discussion.
  • {not sure what culture offers waving tails as a greeting/handshake, not a flaw, just answer that for me, please?}

== crutches and aids==:

  • someone should develop a hang glider for those that want to fly, particularly those species that have useless wings. See Glaseah, Malarai,maybe Aera, not likely Phoenix.

The wings might even be useful as secondary control surfaces.

  • There needs to be a sign language for the Gardkin. It should be easier to develop than that for the Naysha. They need it for the same reason: to talk to the non-telepathic. Considering that real world pets can push buttons that say words and thus communicate to present day humans (with massive training), the Hinichi-Guardkin communication problem shows a lack of initiative on the Hinichi. Specifically this never was produced in the Pelted universe, I guess: https://fluent.pet/

Requests for Renames/Deletes[edit]

Did something get misspelled? Or added by accident? Ask for a fix here from an administrator.

-> Sean's partial list.

Laelkii_Takara_Lifeweave, Story Appearances, should contain all the works referenced in Reference. I have noted the missing ones, but could not find how to update/edit the page. It was not straightforward and looked like it referenced a database or table.This is a common problem where that way of handling lists is used, I have seen it in more than one place. The Story Appearances should not be shorter than the different works listed in References.

Point of View violation in 2022 year end Holiday story (Silver and Gold), POV according to text is Eldritch, actual speaker is Kindlesflame, A male tam-illee. "My only other choice for white tie is whatever native species claimed after the exodus ... and the Tam-illee wear a ridiculous getup with sash and high waist-ed pants that looks good only on people half my height." It is that whole paragraph. If I have the speaker correct, KindlesFlame is not so tall as to be twice the height of his species. And should be familiar with the formal wear of his people. Also he is talking about his people as if they were not his people "The Tam-illee" not "my people" not 'we' or 'us', not 'the local Tam-illee' not 'us foxes'. (I need to wait until that story is canon, is published for real)

Are Kellen Grove and Armin Palland alive at the same time? (to use an example). Are they in the same solar system? Planet? I do not have info to know, and while it would be a huge task to add birth (and death?) dates to every character, it might well be worth it, more-so as you are moving to a calender/date based system.

Judiesh noted in Mindtouch, near 20% point, has no mention in this wiki, was a roommate to Vashiht'h before Jahir. Find in paragraph beginning "He's a good roommate"

Fulfilled Bounties[edit]

If you've fulfilled a request, move it here and mark your name so we know who gets thanks!

  • Jaguar answered: "Rispa is named for the "Seersan Mist Sister." Who are the the Mist Sisters?" with Four Sisters
  • Thaniet's name, answered by Sporky
  • Krystal's name, answered by Sporky
  • KetDusky answered: Olthemiel's last name
  • KetDusky answered: Eldritch winter holiday descriptions
  • Lirleni answered: "Did Tolden definitely leave with Lisinthir at the end of Farmer's Crown? I don't remember" I put the references on his page. We don't see the actual leave-taking, but everything points to him going, along with Juzie, her betrothed, and Qora.
  • Glaseahn rites have been copied out of Heartskein.
  • Kuuvel the wisecracking surgeon was not at the palace for Lisinthir's wedding. Biography expanded.
  • Battle of Selnor and Battle at Apex-East have been edited, including witness lists as best as I can figure.
  • Jaguar marked the deceased crew of the Willseeker months ago.
  • Sevhi is typo of Sehvi, fixed, Sean, amazing because I'm dyslexic. It was not easy for me.
  • Esper Talents and Starbases info has been copied out of Heartskein for a while now.
  • Jaguar answered the question about Jahir letting Sediryl watch (https://studiomcah.locals.com/post/468690/questions-you-have).